LOVE ITTTTT!!!!!!!!!hehehehe no duh i would love it i saw the movie last night with u hahahaha.that movie made me cry!dang u cinna u got me hooked on indian movies from bollywood!darn u hahahaha well i still love it so bye
~*~Jamilla~*~

I like the emotion you put into this poem, and you had some great description and detail, also some great vocab! Only thing is that some of you ideas seem a bit incomplete, meaning you start to say something, but then you move onto something else. You have a great poem here, a little more details could make it even greater!

-Mikochan