Wow excellent, this poem really touches me, I was never abused or anything by my dad but ya theres alot of sh*t happening with him, anyway, very good work, stay strong!-xxx-

Omg thats AMZING
it got me choked up!!
its sad too
i love it so much
i wish i could write like that!!!!
great job
i wish i could vote more then once!!
5/5

Omg this is soo sad but i'm glad u wrote it, and i'm sure it feels gud 2 get things outa ur system. i no wot it's like to be abused and i no just how shit family breakdowns can be. just remember each time you think about it the pain will eventually become less and less, it may not happen straight away but it does. it's taken 12 years for me 2 start to open up and trust me writing poems is a g8 way 2 start. all ma peoms r bout things that have happened 2 me or friends, anyway keep up the good work and i'd luv 2 tlk 2 ya if u eva wanted 2. anyway peace out
xoxo

Wow gurl dats deep. But a great poem dat cums 4rm the heart. Godd job. 5/5
-HUGS N KISSES!

WOW WOW WOW WOW
Its like being kicked in the face
Excellent, great, fantastic

The last parts sweet i hope you get the love you truly deserve
Lots of luv B

Thanx for telling me that you were finished... i really liked it!!

Im so sorry about that. You are a very good writer and you need to keep up the good work. When ever you feel the need to do something stupid or wrong, just look at the one thing that makes you happy and concentrate on it. Works every time! *hugz*

You have no idea how werid this is..that explains the relationship that i have with my father almost word for word. You are a great writer, you captured every part of my emotions. I absolutely love this poem! Keep it up!
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Nice writing maybe a little more rhymes. a little hard to get into (my opinion) but very meaningfull great job.