This is such a truely beautiful poem, I have no words. The images were so clear as I read it, and the colours so vivid. Amazing.
*VioletRaven*
P.S. I love your quotes as well, just been reading them and they are all 5/5 from me.

Awesome, the name says it all. That was a great piece of work. Your getting better over time.

Love you
xoxo
Matt

Beautifull! i love the way you write! the poem has a great flow to it and creates a beatifull image. 5/5

I just want to get lost in your writing and never come bakc. How beautiful!!!

Wow. Excellent. This is VERY good. You are very very very very talented. Keep up the good work! Lotsa love -xxx-

OMG Suz!!!!
that was the best poem ive EVER read
I dont even have words to explain it
I wish i could write poetry like you can
OMFG
SUzie omg
sorry i cant give you better comments but
MFG
that was the BEST
DONT ever stop writing suzie
EVER EVER EVER!!!!
Thank you for sharing this poem with me its helped (you dont know it yet)

An incredible write. The descriptions were brilliant, I can picture all of it, I can almost see it playing like a film before me. Perfection... those descriptions displayed a perfect world.. but the twist in the end.. it's a sad tale. Perfection has its own flaws isn't it? Good job. =)

Thats a perfect poem and i absoltely love it, if u continue to make poems that amazing, then ill certainly read and rate them. 8-)

..............
wow.........
that was AMAZING!!!!!!
it gave me shivers, the images were so beautiful

that was so great!!! i love it. that poem is so amazing

ruby

Wow...gr8 description words....it was so excellent....lovd this poem 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

Wow wow wow .. i just can't say anything about this one..i loOoOove it..

Phenomenal work. It has such great imagery and flow through out the poem.

Crazy... absolutely bananas. Good write.

This one was really interesting.... made me think..........

I love your poem.
it's awesome and clear.
by the way, thanks for commenting and please rate and comment my other poems.

loads of love, PAPERDOLL

Really i've no words to express that all of ur poems more than wonderful,u show so beautiful meanings in a symbolic way,&i adore this a lot,u mixed the ideas&the feelings in a special way..u r distinguished..keep shinnin

I hope it is ok, but i used this poem in an anthology i did.

That was brilliant, I'm really goin to have to practice to get that good I'll probably be dead before I get that good, lol. Anyway...words cannot explain the greatness of that poem

Awww, sweet. thanku peoples!!

Yeah, thats' fine Ruby. i'm honoured : )