Heart So Numb

by End Of Eternity   Nov 23, 2005


Right behind me
there is a door i cant see

right in front there is a noose
confused but then what is there to loose

you are standing right next to my left hand
you watch me bleed and say you understand

i see my saviour when i look above
my knife is scared of me though you called this love

i look at this red river flowing beneath my skin
i look in your eye, you remind me of regret, you remind me of my sin

i feel so helpless while i turn to my right
will there be someone to save me from this plight?

you stare at me with that evil smile
show me the key to my door & run another mile

i know for all these years i have been a game for you
someday you will know what you have put me through

where am i, who am i?
standing alone i feel so dumb
thinking of what to think next
my heart is so numb

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    This is a poem full of so much sadness and pain. It can almost cry itself. Excellent job on the emotion.

    i know for all these years i have been a game for you
    someday you will know what you have put me through

    These lines cut right through my heart. To know you have felt this way. Makes me wish I could be there with you.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    I feel so helpless while i turn to my right.. will there be someone to save me from this plight?

    Banda haazir hai! Arrey yaar, main hu naa? lol...

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Is your heart still numb now...hope not...I think not...if u r able to write a poem...hmm...ok...nice poem...I see you try to make it rhyme...nice try...

  • 19 years ago

    by KrypticKristen

    OMG I really really love this one i can really relate...i know how you feel and it's horrible tht u ahve 2 go thru this aswell..i hope things get better..keep up the good workd xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Rich

    Incredible! They type of writing that makes you sit make and let it soak in. thank you!!!

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