by Puerto_Rican_Chick Nov 23, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Every morning i wake up and notice more and more |
by pseudo
Wow.. all your poems are so sad an emotional.. they speak how you feel in every single one.. and they are so wonderfully written.. keep up the awesome work =] |
Brillliant poem, your choise of vocab is very effective. |
by Sherry Lynn
The words are great, but I would break it up into stanza's to make it easier for the reader. Sad to say, but you speak the truth in this poem. |
by Michelle
Awwww.... don't give up.... YOU can do it..... do your best; that's all you CAN do! :o) |