Awwww.... don't give up.... YOU can do it..... do your best; that's all you CAN do! :o)

big hugs, love always,

michelle

The words are great, but I would break it up into stanza's to make it easier for the reader. Sad to say, but you speak the truth in this poem.

--Sher

Brillliant poem, your choise of vocab is very effective.

5/5

Wow.. all your poems are so sad an emotional.. they speak how you feel in every single one.. and they are so wonderfully written.. keep up the awesome work =]

--emotionless19*