Omg... this poem made me cry! Amazing job... I hope this poem isn't true! If so, you can talk to me whenever ya need to.... 5/5

Such confused emotions!
It was such a happy poem at the begining and then wow, so sad at the end!!
Its a great poem, the atmosphere is so sad and takes the reader into the poem, brings a tear to my eye..
Well done, you expresed your self very well, fix some of the grammer errors and it would great :D
xx

So sad, yet so much truth. YOu remind me of me in the way you write. Keep it up, it will really take you far someday.

GREAT rythm. I loved this poem. It's EVERY bit as good as mine, but in a different way.

That was brilliant
Such beauty
Please comment on my latest 2 poems
Thank you

Love Sondos

This was very good Ruthie! The poems that I've read of your are all really good! Youre doing a great job, Keep it up!!!
My poems are okay, but Im sure some can be fixed...Check them out if you want!

Ruthie, this is really good. and sad reminds me of my relationship. youre on my favs too

Thats so sweet but sad. I have tears in my eyes. Great work keep writing hun. thanks for commenting my poem btw.
~Juls~

Good job, Ruthie! I really like your stuff! And thanks for commenting on my poems, I really appreciate it! :D

Wow a really sad poem really good but really sad i liked it! 5/5

Wow this is a very emotional poem. I can imagine writting this poem has hurt you the most.

Beautifully writting, very touching and emotional.

Very well done

Lotsaaa love
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Awwww.

This.
Is.
Tear-jerking.

I love it.!

5/5

LOVE
Lolli.xx

Awww wow hunni thats amazing, i do relate to it, thanks for the comment. this is soo good. the whole structure and it flows so well, omg! cant believe you wrote that! well done please keep writing xxxxxx keep in touch honey xxxxxxx

Omg!!! Girl this is sooo good i wanna cry... Keep it up that was amazing.. Im putting mine on soon

So much emotion and it brought tears t my eyes. the words in it are so strong, with lots of meaning to them. Great job. If you get a chance, please comment on one of my poems
5/5

xx
chelsea