Anorexia Part II

by Matters   Nov 23, 2005


The "long awaited" Part II.

You belonged to him now,
Tortured, bound, and taut,
Starvation was remembered,
The former life forgot.

You'd become a chamber,
Health was rapidly declining,
You knew that it would happen soon,
You knew inside you're dying.

Plunged deeply into nothing,
Lived inside the pit,
Death was nearing, scared you were.
Blackness couldn't fit.

I looked to your eyes,
Subconscious and removed,
Inside I stifled screams,
I felt so sad, confused.

But then your parents found you,
Hanging on your thread,
Encasing fragments of your soul,
But they knew inside you're dead.

Gone now is the messenger,
He dug your grave so deep,
You're happy now, joy vivacious,
Released your final weep.

What brought you here, curious,
Stitched to make you sewn,
Was not the love, life or laugh,
But yet remains unknown.

I know that you were locked up,
Not what you're meant to be,
But now the lock is broken,
Acceptance was the key.

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  • Good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney

    OMG!!! I love both part I &II Kepp up the good work huney!! gosh i can't believe your only what 12-13? I'm almost 16 and can't write nearly as good as you!! Keep up the good work and your girlfriend is very luck to have such a sweetheart like you! Wish I was lucky enough to have a guy like you!

    Love always, Britt

  • 18 years ago

    by norman

    Nice work on this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by norman

    Nice workq

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    So sad, so deep, and sooooo well written and expressed! 5/5, and couldn't be anything less!
    luv Helen
    xxx