Time (finished)

by Tia   Nov 23, 2005


Dazed and confused not knowing what to do,
She lays in bed with a gun to her head,
putting and end to the pain,
pulling the triger with now shame,
laying there bleeding with a bullet in her head,
still alive yet motion less thinking of the life she once had,
wishing and hoping it wasn\'t that bad....

As she lay there, taking one breath after another
feeling pain she never felt before.
listening to the the sounds that fall around her,
She soon hears her mothers voice,
\"its time, get up and out of bed\"
She awakes, what seemed like reality was just a dream,
she\'s back in hell were she lives with all this pain.

All she wants is for somebody to love her,
All she wants is for somebody to care,
All she wants is to live her life knowing you are there,
All she wants is to be with friends that treat her the way she treats them,
All she wants is to be back in the past were they all got along,
the past were everybody belonged.

As time goes by,
Months pass,
and the only scares that are left are the ones on her arm,
a new one each day,
the only way she feels it all slip away.

Than he comes to the rescue,
giving her all she ever wanted,
all she ever needed,
the cuts soon go away,
she is happy again all because you took it all away.

The pain no longer hunts her at night,
no longer does she feel alone,
no longer does she hate everthing,
no longer does she run from her home.

She lives every waking moment of her life knowing somebody loves her,
Knowing somebody is cares,
Knowing he is there for her,
Now that she is better and treats herself right,
Her friends are back, she has walked into the light.

Her life is better thanks to her baby,
Thanks to him she no longer relies on the knife to take away the pain,
The three little words he says to her washed it all away,
Bringing joy to her life each and everyday.

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I finished it finally, it just hit me
it took me a while but i did it. Idk
if your going to like it so just plz
tell me the truth, comment and vote it
would mean a lot to me..well thanks for
reading it i know it was a little long.

Tia Bia

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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I love the way this poem ends... you did a great job writing this! Good work, hun!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    P.s. keep up the good work weetheart! and keep your head held high because nooboby is any better than you! remember that next time someboby tries to bring you down. just ignore them! it makes them madder than it would make you!!!(you listened to them about tring to put you down!) i love you girl! l8r!
    -thornton

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    AWWW!!! tia! i loved it! you are good inspiration! i wish i had just a tenth of your talent for writtning poems! well got to go! love ya girl!
    -thornton

  • I like it and i lived a life like that but my guy took it all away so now i sit in shame, now cry and wish for better days

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