I like it and i lived a life like that but my guy took it all away so now i sit in shame, now cry and wish for better days

AWWW!!! tia! i loved it! you are good inspiration! i wish i had just a tenth of your talent for writtning poems! well got to go! love ya girl!
-thornton

P.s. keep up the good work weetheart! and keep your head held high because nooboby is any better than you! remember that next time someboby tries to bring you down. just ignore them! it makes them madder than it would make you!!!(you listened to them about tring to put you down!) i love you girl! l8r!
-thornton

I love the way this poem ends... you did a great job writing this! Good work, hun!