Wow thats so sad!! but really well written. good job
luv courtie

Really liked your poem, very sad. Great writing, well done x

I Think this poem has alot of potential to be wonderful, but it seems like you comprimised the overall quality and what you were really trying to say just to make it rhyme. Maybe try wrighting it over with out thinking about the rhyme, just to see if it turns out better. Good attempt though.

I liked it but lors right it could have been done better but still very good

This poem is really good, its truly amazing keep upthe good work

lots of love
*~*becky*~*

That was an amazing poem. I have read all of your poems and they are all really good. Keep up the good work, and thanks for commenting on my poem.

Luv Chantelle