Death To All
by EthaniaShea Nov 23, 2005
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18 years ago
by Chit Cyn
The metre too consistent a repetition, as hybrid form like a song/poem it seems. Sounded good for a poem to have lines repeated to stress a particular emotion but having too much is redundancy, and we might as well replace some lines with other words in congruence as long as the rhymes must be taken into mind to come up with the right blend. As a whole, the poem can relate as to it's anger and hatred felt within its theme, although as in structure it failed a bit of effort for a poem but for a song. Nonetheless, a good song, at most times comes from a hybrid poem such as this. Be proud of yourself lady, as u can do both. You're a promising poetess, keep on writing.- loadsofluv, chitcyn
