That's sad =(....it's a pretty good poem, the flow isn't great, but the flow is always difficult for me =P lol...tihs is a sad poem, i'm sorry if it's true...i'm here anytime you need to talk or anyting *hugs*

-brittnay-

Awesome poem, really disturbing actually, but great poem. keep writing xxx

Wow that was intense I dont think I blinked once while reading.I'm so sry if this is true and I am here to talk to you whenever you need it..I truly mean tha from the bottom of my heart.Great job hun and keep up the great work!!
xoxJuls (aka Julie)

Nice poem. The flow was a little off, but still great job!! Keep up the work.