by Strange Angel Nov 23, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The solemn sphere descends in light, |
by Fig
Oooh!!! i love poems about the moon and this one is just spectacular! the imagery and language!!! ooh my! |
Whoa! this is my favourite poem of yours so far! Seriously good. I really like the personification and the metaphors used, especially about the stars being 'tears of light'. |
by ..eliSa*
Absolutly amazing job. great style of writting. keep up the good work! smilee |
by LuVlYlUfFlY
G8 poem loved it keep it up 5/5 |
Wow this was beautiful.. Its really refreshing to read something with a different rhyme scheme. and the words you chose were perfect. Nice job.. thanx a bunch for your comments |