by N J Thornton Nov 23, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Seeing familiar faces become distant, |
by Naima
WOW I'm not sure if I got the hidden message but that poem was great!!!! |
by firexflys
I am not sure if this is right or not but i'll say it anyways. it seems to me it's liek you have memories of the past and people in it but the familiar faces are distant because the peopl really dont know who you are, and as you get deeper in to it you show that no one knows you not even your self but you long for some one too. well that what i kinda got out of it i guess the way you made it there might be ways for the poem to relate to other things and not just what you made it for. but thats just me nice job keep up ther good work |
by xX-jess-Xx
This poem is awesome. when i read it through the second time knowing about the dementia, i read it in a whole new context. I was just wondering how you got the idea for this poem...its a great one. if someone in your family suffers from it, im truely sorry. |
This i s avery good poem. it must be terriable to life like that with all your memorys slipping away, all knowledge of your past and therefore of who you are. |
by Little Dot
That's horrible to have to live like that everyday. I wouldn't know what to do with myself. It would be as if nothing is worth living for and just being lost in the world. |