Each a part of me

by xX-jess-Xx   Nov 23, 2005


Emily's so pretty,
she was the first to find her way.
But we all soon found out,
she was easily lead astray.

Guess what looks will get you,
a guy and a reputation.
God, Em, you're stunning,
You don't need all that foundation.

Kayleigh's the sweetest,
but she tired of holding it down.
I can tell shes sick of her smile,
all she wants is to wear her frown.

But I love the way you mother, Kay,
I know you'll always be there.
You'll always lend a helping hand,
I know you'll always care.

Becci is the joker,
but she does it along with me.
Does she use it to hide behind?
maybe, its hard to see.

Sometimes i wish she'd open up,
and tell us what she fears.
I cant help but wonder what,
shes been hiding all these years.

Gemma's a miserable cow,
but we love her like she is.
Ha ha, shes a boffin,
a complete computer whiz.

But these days being clever,
doesn't make you very cool.
Maybe thats why she needs us,
so she doesn't feel like a fool.

Now, I really don't have favorites,
but if i did, Ellie would be it.
I love her more than life itself,
even when she acts a tit!

We're just so alike,
in our humor and our style.
She's funny and shes quirky,
the most popular by a mile!

My friends mean a lot to me,
I wouldn't swap them for anything.
Not even a million pounds,
not even a diamond ring.

Because losing them,
would be like losing a part of my soul,
They're each a part of me,
they are what makes me whole.

**dedicated 2 my great friends, i love them all! PLEASE COMMENT**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Very cute , very sweet. its great to have friends like that. amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    Oh my god! This is so sweet and cute. My, my, I have't come across a poem here I can really say cute! =D

    I really, really enjoy this by you, jess. It was wonderfully written and a really lovely dedication to your friends. I felt like I've known them all. And your last 2 stanzas really strike something deep within me. I think I had to start treasuring each and everyone of my friends. =)

    I specially like the writing style for this poem. From the last few poems I've read from yours, I find that you do like to go the straightforward, simple and clear kind of structure. I do like that, no big words, no expressive descriptions and yet you can display such emotions and strength in a poem. Thanks for sharing. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    I like your dedication to your friends really good and shows u have big heart, 5/5 ill tty soon hopefully PeAcE

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Hey jess. I thought this was adorable, lovely friendship poem. I’m sure every friend in this poem appreciates you that bit more for writing this. I really liked how you used humour and called your friends silly names, it made me giggle. I know this is a very personal poem to you so I’m not going to really say much on the improvement side, because this is from your heart. However I will say, stanza three, line two, I think it should be “she’s.” Also, try to capitalise every “I” for the sake of grammar.
    Lovely poem, keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awwww....this was very sweet of you! keep up the great work!

    hugzzz,

    michelle

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