Awwww....this was very sweet of you! keep up the great work!

hugzzz,

michelle

Hey jess. I thought this was adorable, lovely friendship poem. I’m sure every friend in this poem appreciates you that bit more for writing this. I really liked how you used humour and called your friends silly names, it made me giggle. I know this is a very personal poem to you so I’m not going to really say much on the improvement side, because this is from your heart. However I will say, stanza three, line two, I think it should be “she’s.” Also, try to capitalise every “I” for the sake of grammar.
Lovely poem, keep writing.

I like your dedication to your friends really good and shows u have big heart, 5/5 ill tty soon hopefully PeAcE

Oh my god! This is so sweet and cute. My, my, I have't come across a poem here I can really say cute! =D

I really, really enjoy this by you, jess. It was wonderfully written and a really lovely dedication to your friends. I felt like I've known them all. And your last 2 stanzas really strike something deep within me. I think I had to start treasuring each and everyone of my friends. =)

I specially like the writing style for this poem. From the last few poems I've read from yours, I find that you do like to go the straightforward, simple and clear kind of structure. I do like that, no big words, no expressive descriptions and yet you can display such emotions and strength in a poem. Thanks for sharing. =)

Very cute , very sweet. its great to have friends like that. amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.