by myshiningstar14 Nov 23, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Upon salvation your eyes linger, my soul uplifted by the mere presence of your pain marked soul. And still upon my unclear future, I see in the distance your grace healed eyes. |
by Tripp
Hmmm good poem. yeah the repitition in this poem really enhances it...i've been wondering why the repetition and your writing sounded so familiar at times...it makes me think of the prayers and hail marys you recite in church...or maybe im just a loony :-P |
Do you love misc. poems..im just wanderin cause you right a lot of it |
by Shawna
This has really touched me it is were I am at in my life right now. thanks I liked it alot |
by Cuddles
If I'm being truthful...I LOVE IT!!! You must know you have a special knack for writing poetry. Your artistic talent for writing descriptive words is amazing. Don't lose that. |