If I'm being truthful...I LOVE IT!!! You must know you have a special knack for writing poetry. Your artistic talent for writing descriptive words is amazing. Don't lose that.

This has really touched me it is were I am at in my life right now. thanks I liked it alot

Do you love misc. poems..im just wanderin cause you right a lot of it

but great poem though
5/5
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Hmmm good poem. yeah the repitition in this poem really enhances it...i've been wondering why the repetition and your writing sounded so familiar at times...it makes me think of the prayers and hail marys you recite in church...or maybe im just a loony :-P