by Ashleigh Skye Nov 24, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
White hot flames, |
by Void
That was really good. Over all, I loved it. It was uniquely written with a good rhtyhm and even imagery, I loved the images of flame that entered my mind. Great job there! The only complaint I have, is one that you don't even have to worry bout, I'm only nit-picking. These lines used the same word to rhyme and flow. and the middle line was much to long to keep up with the great flow you had before: |
by AlexJ
Wow! I kinda drew a parallell to "a christmas story"... You know the one where Mr scrooge is visited by his old collegues ghost who's wearing a chain of the size of all the bad stuff he's done... !!! hehe well ! Very well written! Nice job! |
by Justin
I like it good poem |
Great poem, super imagery. you told it very well. |
by Cady
Amazing. |