My first and Last

by Iflookscouldkill   Nov 24, 2005


He held me
He kissed me.
He said he loved me
But he lied.

Our first kiss
Was our last.
He told me he loved me
But I was still trying to figure him out.

He said it's over
And told me we could be friends.
But I just looked at him in disgust,
But he'd be a good friend.

He was my first and last love.
Or so I thought.

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  • 18 years ago

    by David Moss

    I'm surprised this score is as low as it is - I thought it was really well done. Your closing lines are brilliant - you dismissed him with a simple "Or so I thought"
    5/5 from me. Cheers and good writing - DM

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