Orphan Child

by starryoceanights   Nov 24, 2005


*this is based on a true story*
children run around wild
too many of them to count
but the one who catches my eye
doesn't look like anyone I've ever seen
her green eyes are worn with depression
having seen sights that no eyes should see
and her grief seems to coat her whole body
as if she'd been painted in pain
her clothes are ragged and torn
and her lips, chapped from the icy wind
and she shivers although it is warm
what could have happened to this child?
to make her life such a storm?
she seems to have jumped out of olden-day TV
her clothes are so faded and gray
the only color on her is her hair
its rich red although ratty and dirty
she doesn't seem to be able to see me
she's locked behind doors in her head
seeing the horrors of her too recent past
reliving the events every day

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Hey, I saw your post on the forums and decided to cheak out your poems. Anyway this one is pretty good, My only suggestion is it ends too abruptly, sounds like you have more to say...so ya welcome to Poems & Quotes

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Very true, and quite bitter, but at the same time it had a refreshing quality of honesty.

    Good Writing!
    beth