Comments : Orphan Child

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Very true, and quite bitter, but at the same time it had a refreshing quality of honesty.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Hey, I saw your post on the forums and decided to cheak out your poems. Anyway this one is pretty good, My only suggestion is it ends too abruptly, sounds like you have more to say...so ya welcome to Poems & Quotes