Wow hun, this is very VERY deep, I loved it, I still cant believe you're only twelve, you write better than some 50 year old poets I know wow, This made me sad to think of this boy, Aw, I hope this isnt about you hun, and if it is aww dont feel like that, there is so much beauty to be found in your soul, but anyways this is such a beautiful & touching poem, amazing work hun, you WILL BE indeed the new shakespear, take care

Wow. Is this about u? I really hope not. If it is Im always here if u need to talk. I can relate to the boy in this poem, whoever it is. It is full of emotion and very deep. definately doesnt sound like a 12 year old. you are very talented at such a young age. plz read some of my poems if u have time. hope all is well
-Sami

:'(
*Jaw dropped*
wow...

sorry i'm actually at a loss for words. That was truly brilliant. Wow you're one of the best poets on this site, seriously.
Like BeautifulDisaster said, i hope this isn't about you, or anyone really, because i wouldn't wish that emptiness, or however you'd describe it in a word, on anyone.
You did an amzing job to capture the anguish..everything...just wow.

If it is about you..matt i find it hard to believe. I don't know you but god you are amazing, talent wise..personality (from what ive seen) and kindness.
Find that in yourself...

take care..
much love,
xoxox
Anna:P (the coolest name EVER:P)

Oh my god! i am actually stunned!! ur talent is incredible, ur poetry is unbelievable, seriously it really is. this poem was very sad, but the wording and emotions were expressed beautifully. just superb.
much love, xxemmaxx

Very meaningful. normal words of rhyme are used. very good.