Nice job love the rhymeing your good with it keep it up 5./5

Wow... this is straight from the heart... beautiful, as always. if she can't see what an amazing and talented guy stands before her, then shes the one at loss. take care and stay strong.
-xXx-

Wow.. you must be a really cool guy to love a girl that way. rock on.

Very good poem David...I like the emotion....sorry about that too....but like you said thats life...lol..sorry...well once again good poem...lataz

Damn dude that was good. David that has alot of emotion and I am also sorry that happened to you. Rock on..

~Matt~