The last tear( broken promise)
by Valeria Nov 24, 2005
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I cant get that moment of my head u cant stand the feeling that i Get when i see u flirting around and u wont Even notice me i try to put a smile on my face and try to hide my tears cause i know u will never come back to me.and trust me that is more pain that i cant handle....as i write my feelings down i cant No longer hold on..a tear fall from my eye promised my self that this would be the last tears ..but tomorrow is another day..another day that i wont have u ...and that is enough for me to break my promise and cry my self to sleep waiting for the day to end SO i can let goo of all of this ..the next day has came ...i went to school but happy face on ...and No tears..all the things that has happened to day ..is enough to break my promise again..till this day i still cry waiting for the last tear so fall out of my eyes.. |
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18 years ago
by Kelsey
I think this is great it is funny because i am going through the same thing and the person i am going through that with he is my best friend and we dated and broke up and i still dont know what to do. Thanks for commenting finding him the poem i wrote comment me back if you want . .
Love ya
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18 years ago
by Jenny
I love this poem. I can relate to it! And keep your head up, because there is a lot more to life then broken hearts and misplaced love... I PROMISE!
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18 years ago
by Jess
Hey thanx 4 ratin my poem!! urs is really gud, i seem 2 feel like dat all the time, that im tryin hard 2 b noticed by him and he jus seems 2 almost luk thru me as tho im not there. and i try 2 smile 2, like u, pretend im happy, and dat my heart isnt screamin inside
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18 years ago
by Jada
Hey this is a good poem. it think that you did a great job writing it and i understand what ur going through completley! keep ur head up.
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18 years ago
by ~Nicole Rae~
Hey there...You write very good poems, and they express alot of feelings...Hang in there, and be strong, I went through alot to and I know where you are coming from, but I promise he is not worth it, you may not believe it, but there is someone soo much better out there for you, stay strong, and if you ever just wanna talk, email me!..Stay strong hun...it will all get better
