by Paul Morris Nov 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Each day, |
by Luciee
Thanks for the comment on my poem. practice makes perfect jus keep up the good writing, i luv the structure of this poem. xxxxxxxxxx luciee |
by Ariana
This could be improved but for your first piece it is quite good. |
by xEmmax
Woah, quite a chilling poem, but v.well written. 5/5 keep up the good work, |
by Tasha
Thanks a lot for the comment. I just put a new one up called Slowly Dying. Check it out. |