Very beautiful poem. Very good, pretty short, easy written, easy to read, easy to understand. No complicated things, just straight. I could feel the pain, hopelessness the emptyness the pain, loneliness. Very good. Excellent. 5/5

Aw hun, this was such an amazing poem I can relate but please dont you feel this way, Everyone feels low sometimes were all human, but dont EVER say goodbye to us or that you'll miss us, you're not going nowhere if I have anything to do with it, you're staying here, you'll get through it hun, we all have those moments sometime, if u need to talk just say :) im always here

I feel this way to.. i moved to a new town and my friends all forgot me. I have nothing left, not even a single friend =( good poem.

I know your writing is just a glimpse of how deep you are. You're incredible and your writing is awesome. You inspire me. Please never give up. You make the world better by what you give.

Terific poem, I love it... a lot.

-Taylor

I hope u meant me...when u said "i'll miss u dearly".. haha...just kidding

great poem once again

Hey huni i really loved this poem, BUT PLEASE DON'T GO! so many people care about y0o, trust me im sure at least one person would care if y0o died, think about the people who y0o care about, how do y0o think they would feel if y0o left...huni i no its hard, but life always is 4 everyone, theres always going to be ups and downs, now im not saying 2 y0o thAT y0o CANT feel this way coz im definitly not saying that coz of course y0o cant MAKE urself happy but i think that y0o should take a long hard think about whether or not y0o really want to leave this world, y0o dont get second chances, if y0o leave then y0o have left 4 good....and if y0o cant think about 1 person hoo cares about y0o then look at me and other people on this site because all these people care and huni if y0o ever need someone just email me and i will give y0o my number and y0o can call me when y0o r not feeling happy and i promice i will b ther 2 talk and give advice and try 2 wipe away ur tears...i no that losing friends r hard and that your parents and people around y0o and especially someone hoo y0o love can make u feel as if the whole world is caving in but just remember...that one day things will change and that the friend y0o lost in a while y0o wont really care about it because u will move on and your parents well one day y0o will move out and then u wont fight with them probably as much and the one y0o love- well i no it will seem hard 2 think that u can get over someone but huni u can, if someone breaks ur heart u just gotta learn 2 keep on living and move on coz ther will b other people hoo will treat y0o better and hoo u will fall in love with.... and theres also skool which at times can b so stressful but just study hard and 1 day u will make a life 4 urself and if u think u dont have any friends at skool well look on the poems site coz babe... i am ur friend and one day wen we r older we can meet up n b friends lmao!! ok?? well i hope u r ok sweetie and just remember dat im always here!! luv u lots! keep shining u r a special girl hoo is very talented....dont give up!

luv always Maddy

Omg...this is breathtaking
i swear i cudnt breathe...
i read thru it 2 times...
why are you feelin low?

But it's better off this way,
I'm going to be free...

love these last lines
does that mean youre gonna die? (in the poem ofcourse :D)

and how come u get so much time to write so many poems....i have to study the whole day!

i love your poems...you'll makes someone very happy with them one day.
Keep writing...tho not so much,...uremy fav and i cant find time to read all poems lol

dhaval

Hey hun,
you're such a great writer, and i wish like you i could put my emotions into words... please try and be happy tho... believe me, i know its not easy... but don't give up--please.
thanks for the talk last night... i still feel no different... but i really just needed someone to understand. i miss u like crazy, you have no idea.
love u, miss you, smile.
xoxoxo

Beautifuly written! =] I can really relate to. I think I remember reading another one of your poems before. It was great but I dont remember which one...

Can't say much... the people up there all said it....... anyways i'll say it. u r really talented! just like you say to your friends, i'll say it to you. keep your chin up! 5/5 ;)

Aww anna i love you!!!! i'll always be your friend! you have sooo many on this site that you can always turn to! i know how your feeling but dont give up! were gonna pull through! trust me. love ya loads hun! ~lex

That's was really good. i like the last stanza.

Hey gorgeous! I send you huggles and lots of love, a smile and anything else I can possibly do. The emotions you expressed in your poem are far to familiar to ones in my own life, so if you feel that way, I know how bad it sucks, and I if I can help hun please let me know, I am only a message away! Great poem!

-Mikochan

So beautiful, so sad.

I'm sorry your feeling low chick, but just keep fighting and pulling yourself back up. Take care.

Luv ness xxx

This is how i feel sometimes but always remember keep your head up you can achive your goals well wish you da best

You gotta lotta heart and ur a very gud writter!..... oxox wen ur down breath and let every breath you take in lift u up!.... wen u feel noons around to say that they care even i'll be there 4 you ( even tho u dnt even know me)

Luv--- Kelly

I love the poem and totally can relate obviously u have alot of people that care about you keep it up i love it soo much stay strong!

I love the poem and totally can relate obviously u have alot of people that care about you keep it up i love it soo much stay strong!

Very well written. Keep up the good work. You're a great poet.