Hey thanx 4 ur comment on my poem and yas it is about some1,some1 who i extremely hate. anyway back to ur poem, i like this poem its got great sence of word use and its got a great meaing behind it. 5/5

luv ya
nami

Hey thanx for leavin me a comment i think u have great ideas about what to write about! well i did have time to comment urs and ur ideas are just so wonderful!

Hey thanx for the comments keep reading mine and even if you dont ill keep reading yours cuz they`re pretty good! i like your ideas a lot. your lines flow really well. i wishi could come up with things like crystal tears. 5/5 l8r

Hope soon you can laugh for real

Hmm we had a positive poem now a sad one :( next ones gotta be happyiful :D

Great poem. really awesome words! :)
sammi

I love the poem its excellent!!

Hey thanks for the comment...
Great poem... I can relate to it...

Great poem i love it!
- Sleeping beauty

Hey, thanks for the comment, your work is great ! i can totally relate to this poem, sorry you feel this way, life gets better, hugs-hayley

Omg! This was really good. I can relate heaps to this one too. It's like you've taken the words out of my mouth. Awesome job! Fav lines;
"I smile and i laugh, and joke around its true
But I'm never rally happy I'm always feeling blue"
I can really relate to that. Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

This was great! I can relate, I like your choice of vocabulary as it makes the poem meaningful.
Chin up and look ahead :)
Much love,
Riffy xxx.