Great poem, I can relate to it but i dont really care what other people think or do but i know the feeling that is portrayed in this poem. Great work

Luv Chantelle

Very nicely written, I really like it.
Hope you're OK though. take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne [5/5]

The over all feel to this is seriously sad and i get it but i think that some of the times you rhymed or some of the words were to forced like "fouler than the foulest owl"
but like i said, over all it was really sad and has a great message in it... keep it up!

Hey i kno i like jus commented but i want to clearify what i meant... what i meant was that it SEEMED to be forced... not the feelings just the words. and i may just not understand cuz i am only 13. neway, i still think ur an awesome writer

Great poem. i love the way u put so many feelings in ur poems. i really like this poem! great work!