Conversation Between Life/Death & My Soul

NItin
Very intense and deep thougts are portrayed in this piece.

MY SOUL TOLD LIFE & DEATH
i think i have played role for both of you now
need no more excuse to stay alive
hence I died
MY SOUL REPLIED

This ending is captivating.
Really grabs one by the throat!
Love Cindy

Hmmm.... I think we both agree with this one. Amazing job. So short yet so meantingful. Chalo dono saath mein marte hai... phir saath mein jeeyenge... kya kehte ho? lol

Thats awsum, its like realistic but imaginary, i no it dont make much sence but its true!!!! u have awsum talent!!!

Hi nitin
its so different and unique.
i loved it. great poem.
excellent job.
take care
bharti

Yes !!! i think this speaks thousands of words without saying anything more. Just love it