Hey, I liked the way you wrote it.
you seem really talented writing.
keep it up.
take care,
marjan

I don't have words... it's so simple but so deep... and so true... i know how this feels-- really do..

good write-- as always...

Love,
Ipsita

I really love this one! very original..great work.
I love the message your sending as well..even if it isnt the happiest one:P
xoxox

Torn apart stole my line... =P It is a very original Idea, and like so few original Idea's this one acctualy looks good on paper.
I like the way you wrote it, shows emotion, and great writing skills.

I don't really have any negative thing to say about this poem....

tc of yourself,
~* TashA ~*

Well thought poem and thank you for commenting me on my poem.. no i never told anyone not to vote on my poem but it seems that no one wants to.. but o well thank you for commenting me once again take care
-Rachel 5/5

You think about death a lot. i really hope you are not considering suicide. if you need someone to talk to you can email me at:
souper_girl@hotmail.com

Woah i love it! all of ur poems are amazing! keep up the good work and thnx 4 commenting on mine..take care xox

Cute poem...how cute is that...u hev a weird mind(by wot I mean by weird)...different...and unique...ur poems r...

Yes !!! i think this speaks thousands of words without saying anything more. Just love it

Hi nitin
its so different and unique.
i loved it. great poem.
excellent job.
take care
bharti

Thats awsum, its like realistic but imaginary, i no it dont make much sence but its true!!!! u have awsum talent!!!

Hmmm.... I think we both agree with this one. Amazing job. So short yet so meantingful. Chalo dono saath mein marte hai... phir saath mein jeeyenge... kya kehte ho? lol

NItin
Very intense and deep thougts are portrayed in this piece.

MY SOUL TOLD LIFE & DEATH
i think i have played role for both of you now
need no more excuse to stay alive
hence I died
MY SOUL REPLIED

This ending is captivating.
Really grabs one by the throat!
Love Cindy