Im sorry that this happened to you!but this poem is really goood

Sry to hear about ur dad but oother than tha i loved this poem u shoul read my other poems and give me ur suggestions

Aw.. this is really sad, and I'm really sorry about your dad. I know it's tough, but everything will work out :) .. but this is a really good poem, it holds so much emotion. Great job. 5/5 Keep it up!