You know, I never noticed the irony that's written in a lot of love peoms, because they compare love to components of death. But it can make sense in a way, because "love can move mountains" or something like that. So basically, love is a powerful force that can change the way you think and perceive things, so maybe it opens your eyes to the world and you see things like death as beautiful. I think love poems only make sense when you're in love. Great poem Sarah, it made me think.

Take Care,
Renee

For me this poem was easy to understand.... falling out of love its hard to think and read what you may have written when you were with that someone.... eyes filled with loved and kissing gives you wings.... it hurts me reading that cause thats what i felt and now its gone.... but anyway Sarah this was a good poem.....
take care....

Crystal....

AWWWWWW!!!!!! Sarah's in love! Just playin. I love the way it explains itself because a true poem makes you think because some stuff i read just explain everything. _ SM