Comments : If You're Looking for Perfect...

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Beautiful. This poem has so much meaning behind it. I truly loved it! And thank you for your comments on my poetry. It means a lot to me. I'm glad I found you too. And yes, I think we have been through the same thing. I am very happy that he broke up with your "ex" best friend. I know what you mean...that your happy they broke up even though he doesn't want you and you don't want him. I'm sure it hurt you when she started dating him...so know it's like haha she doesn't have him and he doesn't have her. Just keep writing...I know it helps me. And I'm here if you need to talk.

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg... I love this poem. I hope this isn't about you, if so I'm always here to talk to. You're an incredible writer, and this poem is flawless.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, that was very really good Emma.
    I liked this part :
    Trust me when I say she's in pieces,
    Yet no one knows.

    keep it up.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    I've already talked to you about this really great writtien poem and i know you would never even consider doing anything like that but it's beautifully written! we're awesome..hah

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    ..i love that one of mine too..it just kinda came out and i SERIOUSLY just wrote it in like under 2 minutes! haha..just came out with a new one (maybe five min on this one! lol.)
    ch-ch-check it out and tell me what you think! LOL..

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Terrific poem!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just me

    Your an incredible writer and this poem is very moving