Spider Web

by Truest Lies   Nov 24, 2005


Spider bite on your heart,
You were caught in his web from the very start,
A twisted form of wanting,
Because he has so many arms,
But none will ever hold you.
The only thing you will ever feel is ice cold fangs sinking into your neck,
And sweet unconsciousness,
Times in your own cold world to reflect.
This is the love of your spidery friend,
Who left a mark on your heart,
And trapped you in his web.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I like how you compaired love to a Spider and it's web. Really creative, It was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Once again, amazing work. I can really relate to this poem. I love the imagery in this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I love the medaphor you used... what a way to describe someone that is not only cold, but also manipulating.

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    Interesting way of describing love. This is very creative.

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This has quite a metaphorical tone to it, the spider being a manipulating male wrapping you in his web and breaking your heart. I thought it was well written and the only suggestion is to break the 6th line up because the lengthy line interrupts the flow a bit. Keep writing.

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