Beautiful.. I really liked the way you wrote this poem. Great job hun!

This has quite a metaphorical tone to it, the spider being a manipulating male wrapping you in his web and breaking your heart. I thought it was well written and the only suggestion is to break the 6th line up because the lengthy line interrupts the flow a bit. Keep writing.

Interesting way of describing love. This is very creative.

I love the medaphor you used... what a way to describe someone that is not only cold, but also manipulating.

--Sher

Once again, amazing work. I can really relate to this poem. I love the imagery in this one.

I like how you compaired love to a Spider and it's web. Really creative, It was really good.