Comments : I dont want to lose you

  • 19 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    Lovely poem hunni this is so sweet i hope barbera is ok. xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Omg honey am so sorry ma best m8z mum had it 2, this is a really good poem 5/5
    love
    XxFeEBeDeExX

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    First line needs to be editted. Small mistake, but it doesn't take away from the poem. Another good write. Keep it up.