It was really good..sorry if its true..its like my mate, shes my strenght..mwah, keep it up...it gets better aye....

Wow nice write!! The flow was good too.. i loved it.. k keep writting!!

Great flow and very well written :)

*clap* that was excellent!

Xellent is the limit i could i give to this one...so i wont miss the chance :o)

great poem yet again...fabulous indeed

Sometimes death seems like the end but really its just the beginning.

good job! I love the way this rhymes. keep up the good work

Very good I like this one alt as well....I would prob say one of your best 5/5 keep it up

Wow... that was soo good... so touchy and true... i really felt it... great job.. i think you're really talented...
keep writing hun

Love,
Ipsita

Nice job girl love the end, i can feel the deepness of it nice job keep up the good work.

Nice..you impress me with such poems like this...each and everyone of them are so different...different from thos eI've seen...you are a poet who can write in whatever condition u r in...that I know 4 sure...and that's great...

All i have to say is WOW....u have such a sad sad voice while saying this out loud...thats just how i hear u....i love the emotion and the wordz that u used...keep up the great work...5/5

Wow this is good

Your pretty good

Awesome poem you did a great job 5/5 keep it up

AWWW SOO SAD.. KEEP UR HEAD UP!! alright.. good job 5/5

The emotion you try to express comes through really clearly in your poems, this was sad and i hope you feel better someday... really well penned and so fluent