I love this poem...cuz i feel the same way...what is happiness and how can i acquire it?? so many questions...yet so little answers...

Great poem. I wonder the same thing. Why are we here? Why are we sitting here if we'll die anyway?Why should we keep going if the pain will never stop and why do people say they're happy if deep inside they're not? I'm writing a poem of it now. I'll post it up when I'm done. Keep up the good work.

All of your poems seem so sad.
I think I need to avoid all your sad poems, because they all relate to me, or how I've felt. but they are so good :P

Great poem. very questioning an dwill releate to a lot of people

Such a sad poem. Almost every line had something sadder to say than the previous. I really liked the two lines "My happiness has flown away
It's gone to the ends of the earth."
There is one line though that I don't understand. "My happiness is a gone," I'm thinking maybe you have a typo here? Well done, keep writing.

Great poem! I can definitely relate and have felt this way many times throughout my life.

Aw hun, first of all this poem is sad and I can definetly relate, second of all I think it was very creative, what is happiness indeed, I do not think any of us are COMPLETELY Happy, a good thing to think about, well done anyways, great poem take care

This is a great poem, because nobody really knows what happiness is and when it's gone you wish you had it back.

I feel like that sometimes. Good poem, you should check out some of mine. We seem to write about the same things.

Wow ! 5/5
love amy

I dont know if it was intentional but i like the way the erratic structure promotes the idea of confusion and desparation.

I feel the same way....awww.. if you eva need anyone to listen, i'm here for ya... ok?

big hugs,
michelle