by firexflys Nov 24, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
If you R/R/C i will be sure to do that same thanks |
This is exactly how i feel about one of my friends so again i can really relate and it totally touched me! good job tis extremely well written! take care xxx |
by dora
0h that a beautiful friendship p0em. very well written!! such a beautiful piece. very t0uching n heartfelt great j0b!! i realli liked it! keep up the gr8 w0rk!! =) |
by Darien
This was a good poem, it was sad, and full of emotion. There's only one problem, there's a few spelling mistakes. Fix it up, and this poem will kick butt and take names. |
by LadyPearl
Pretty good, though it seems that every line is connected to the next line, as in a sentence. ........that sounds confusing right? lol Keep it up |
by Mezmeryz
Awww dis is sucha sad poem! but its really good too..keeep it up m8! |