by Beckey
Really good poem! thanks for commenting and voting on mine ... i did the same for you 5/5 |
by Rachielle
I love this poem you are very telented! |
by Rachielle
I love this poem you are very telented! |
AAAMAAZING!!!!!!! |
by N J Thornton
Very touching poem. I liked how you said so much in the poem and you went through the entire friendship background. I think you have a few spelling mistakes though, in the 2nd, 4th and 5th stanzas. I know you didn't ask for critical comments but I thought I'd point that out. Keep writing. |
by Jennifer
That poem was so great...keep writing! |
Great job. i hope everythings working out for you. stay strong and live life as well as you can. |
by Mezmeryz
Awww dis is sucha sad poem! but its really good too..keeep it up m8! |
by LadyPearl
Pretty good, though it seems that every line is connected to the next line, as in a sentence. ........that sounds confusing right? lol Keep it up |
by Darien
This was a good poem, it was sad, and full of emotion. There's only one problem, there's a few spelling mistakes. Fix it up, and this poem will kick butt and take names. |
by dora
0h that a beautiful friendship p0em. very well written!! such a beautiful piece. very t0uching n heartfelt great j0b!! i realli liked it! keep up the gr8 w0rk!! =) |
This is exactly how i feel about one of my friends so again i can really relate and it totally touched me! good job tis extremely well written! take care xxx |