by unprotected lover Nov 24, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I watch the news |
Wow that is really true. I really don't think him or kerry should have one though. I don't think either of them would actually be able to handle whats happening |
by Truest Lies
Yes, pretty good. At the same time some of the rhymes didn't make that much sense, but I still got the over-all feeling, and that was good. |
by Little Dot
Very in depth meaningful poem. It has a lot of truth behind it. |
by Vegetable
This is pretty good, I definatly agree with your oppinion, I'm honestly ashamed sometimes to call myself an American. But this sounds more like a bunch of statments than an organized poem. good work though. |