This is pretty good, I definatly agree with your oppinion, I'm honestly ashamed sometimes to call myself an American. But this sounds more like a bunch of statments than an organized poem. good work though.

Very in depth meaningful poem. It has a lot of truth behind it.

Yes, pretty good. At the same time some of the rhymes didn't make that much sense, but I still got the over-all feeling, and that was good.
Nice writing here!

-beth

Wow that is really true. I really don't think him or kerry should have one though. I don't think either of them would actually be able to handle whats happening