by xX-jess-Xx Nov 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Typical me, |
by Katlynn
Amazing job. very sad but i love the concept of this poem, that everything no matter where you are or who you are everything will always be Typical and no one can change that at all because it's everywhere. I really liked this one alot. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
Thts sad, but Nice Work, i like your repitition, keep it up 5/5 |
Great flow though out thsi poem, the repition of the word typical was very effective too. |
I like the idea of sorting through typical feelings great job on the poem it flowed smoothly 5 |
by xDryTearsx
I liked it alot good job. :) |