Very good. The flow was fantastic and you really put feeling into it. I liked the repetition as well, good work.

I Love it! I really do...
keep on writing
-Mols

Typical, typical, typical...not really. I really liked how you repeated "typical" because although some things in the poem are familiar to other people, others may seem not so "everyday." Some parts do seem to be quite unoriginal such as the hurting and hating parents, but I guess that's just how some teens feel. I don't really have any real improvements suggestions for this other than maybe a expansion on the overall idea. With some new thoughts on this subject and creative descriptions that could make it less "ordinary." This was a very emotional write though. Well done!!!

If you really want to comment me back, feel free to do so on any of my poems, maybe my newest one. It's totally up to you though about returning the favour.
And while we're on the subject I'm adding you to my favourites because I know that you have the potential to grow so much and I want to keep reading your work.

I liked it alot good job. :)

I like the idea of sorting through typical feelings great job on the poem it flowed smoothly 5

Great flow though out thsi poem, the repition of the word typical was very effective too.

well done

Thts sad, but Nice Work, i like your repitition, keep it up 5/5

Amazing job. very sad but i love the concept of this poem, that everything no matter where you are or who you are everything will always be Typical and no one can change that at all because it's everywhere. I really liked this one alot. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.