Aww thank you Cynthia ...im really glad you liked it.

Wow thank you .....that means a lot...i'll have a read at the poem for you.

Hey Lisa! I loved htis poem, it was beautiful! I'm definately becomgin a fan of yours..awesome work

hey vito? Where the hell ya been?

Awww thanks everyone for the comments....i have been on a bit of a low lately........Your comments are awesome thanks.

brilliant poem Lisa, you'll have everybody smiling at the way you've written this sad poem. It was a very good idea and I love your interpretation of the cold breeze everyone feels when someone has died, K

I love sharing my work with people...........cause i think if my poems can help even someone just a little then its all worthwhile...thank you's so much.

you have a lot of talent.... ever think of getting some of your work published?

Thanks Rachel ...i would love to have my work published but that costs a lot of money and i dont think i have enough experience to publish my work yet....although i would love to do it now.

hey gr8 poem lisa you even nearly made josh cry and thats got to b something! hayleyxx