Pictures

by Vulnerant Omnia, Ultima Necat   Nov 25, 2005


Pictures shredded on the floor,
Of you and her,
Pictures grinning happily,
Why not me.

Pictures of a long lost place,
Of happiness and grace,
Pictures of sweet yesterday,
Nothing good can stay.

Pictures keep our memories,
Golden, blue and grey,
Pictures of the enemy,
Why not me?

Why in the night do you run to her,
Why in the day do you laugh with her,
Why in life do you ignore me,
Why in death do you mourn me?

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is so sad. I liked it a lot though, I really liked these lines: Why in the night do you run to her,
    Why in the day do you laugh with her, ;;;
    Though they are sad they stilll piece together all the pain or saddness you had. This is something like what I write. 5/5 Keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I dun think that this deserves the rating that it has, I think it's good, though the message is sad...

    Ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Not entirely great. It did have this concept but it wasn't really attainable. Some interesting imagery but not really wowing. It's just the words chosen. They weren't exactly as awe inspiring as they could have been.
    ~Faith-less

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey hun... I really enjoyed that and whoever rated that a 3 should feel ashamed of themselves! lol keep it up huny that was a great job. thankyou so much 4 the comment! :) Ruthie $hearts;

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