by Vulnerant Omnia, Ultima Necat Nov 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Pictures shredded on the floor, |
This poem is so sad. I liked it a lot though, I really liked these lines: Why in the night do you run to her, |
by RetroRavey
I dun think that this deserves the rating that it has, I think it's good, though the message is sad... |
Not entirely great. It did have this concept but it wasn't really attainable. Some interesting imagery but not really wowing. It's just the words chosen. They weren't exactly as awe inspiring as they could have been. |
by Ruthie
Hey hun... I really enjoyed that and whoever rated that a 3 should feel ashamed of themselves! lol keep it up huny that was a great job. thankyou so much 4 the comment! :) Ruthie $hearts; |