Comments : Whats wrong with me?

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, you expressed your feelings wonderfuly bertha. I'm happy that
    things are getting better now.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Awww....sweetie...I absolutly loved it! You wrote magick! Everything I've wanted to say...you said for me! Thank you! Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very powerfully expressed emtions in this peice, well done on that front. thought the structure could be better the content really more than makes up for it