Aww my sweetie! i feel so bad but at least we got to talk..till like 2 am.hah..well things will get better..bertha's here for you ;)

Wow... you have got a gift.... that poem almost made me cry... its great that your dad means so much to you... and i hope he is there forever... great poem.

OMG WOW, -gasps- I am crying right now hun that was so sad!!! OMG wow, It must be horrible to go through something like that, losing your father can be the most horrible thing to happen especially to girls, were always kind of daddys girls hehe, wow omg this is so sad, Awwww I hope your dad is recovering well, keep it up best wishes hun, xxoo

Different from your other poems but...amazing none-the-less. I am so sorry for your *almost* loss. It must have been so hard on you! I hope he has fully recovered and he'll never have another one!

Hun... you are one of the most talented writers on this site. I love this poem... it gave me chills, and almost brought me to tears... simply amazing...